I had to put transition words, fix any mistakes, and make the following paragraph better. It is on a book called Tuck Everlasting. It is a paragraph saying the similarities of the book and movie version. This is the best I could do. Can u see what you can do to make it really good. The most important thing is transition words and flowing the writing. Thank you!
Both versions of Tuck Everlasting have major quotes. One quote is, “Don’t be afraid of death Winnie; be afraid of the unlived life! “said Angus Tuck. Angus is telling Winnie that death is part of life and it is meant to be. Also, that is the theme of the story. Another quote is, “What is my game? You detect in me a playful mood?” said “the man in the yellow suit.” He is talking to Mr. Foster because he will find his daughter if Mr. Foster sells him his land. A third important quote in both versions is, “I am going to be 17 forever!” said Jesse Tuck. Winnie learns the Tucks are immortal. These quotes are major in both versions and add suspense.
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