1. PLEASE learn to use commas after introductory phrases/clauses. If your readers have to read everything twice or more to "get" your meaning, you'll lose them.
perceive and see = redundant; delete one of these verbs
is
2. ... such a thrilling...
3. OK
I forgot to add a few more sentences.
I hope you can check them, too.
1) According to Wordsworth imagination sharpened a special intuition, which enabled the poet to perceive and see things the ordinary man is (or was??) usually blind to.
2) The bird never sang with a voice so thrilling (or with such a thrilling voice).
3) The colonists refused to pay taxes without being represented in the English Parliament. King George III sent troops to put down the rebellion.
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