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The issue of not upholding Australia’s current approach to addressing the global refugee crisis is marked by the unprecedented conformity of populations crossing international borders worldwide, forced to flee conflicts outlined by international human rights principles in the United Nations High Commissioner for Refugees (UNHCR). Presently, legislation under the Migration Act 1958 (Cth) governs Australia's approach to refugees and asylum seekers, under scrutiny for its alignment with key international obligations from the 1951 Refugee Convention, which contain principles of non-refoulement, visa provision, and detention centre legal use in specific circumstances. A real-life case study for the argumentative essay was analysed and evaluated, with a recommendation formulated to allow global refugee crises to fulfil their international obligations under key human rights treaties and conventions.
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