1) The trip showed me that there is a big world outside. I decided to take the trip to keep good company with my family.
2) We stopped several times to fill up and to have a snack. We arrived in Rome after five hours of travel.
3) Our room had a private bathroom with a shower, a hairdryer, Internet access, modem connection, satellite television, ,and a balcony that overlooked the sea.
4) During our stay there, we visited the city centre and went on a sightseeing bus tour in Paris, where we visited the cathedral. (This sentence is not a continuation of #3, right? I don't think Paris overlooks the sea.)
5)I spent most of my time swimming in the hotel’s swimming pool.
I changed my name to Henry1 because other students have chosen Mike, Mike 1.
As you suggested to me, I chose five sentences. Thank you.
1)The trip showed me that there is a big world outside.I decided to take (??) the trip to keep my family good company.
2) We stopped several times to fill up and to have a snack. We arrived in Rome after five hours of travel (?).
3)Our room was endowed with a private bathroom with a shower, a hairdryer, internet access, modem connection, satellite television, radio and a balcony that overlooked the sea.
4)On our stay there we visited the city centre and went on a sightseeing bus tour in Paris, where we visited the cathedral.
5)I spent most of my holiday time (??) swimming in the hotel’s swimming pool.
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