Question

I am writing my essays and I wrote them but i not know how to start the beginnings of them. this on movie smoke signals. i am writing on themes, but i cant start intro like "in the film .. because someone else be doing that for movie review, so i not know how to start with themes. i want to do something like "there are many compelling themes in this movie that take you on ride through feeling of your own emotions ?

Answer 1

How about --

Many compelling themes in this movie that take you on ride through feeling of your own emotions.

Answer 2

thanks ms. sue :)

Answer 3

You're welcome --

A correction -- eliminate "that" and "feeling of".

Many compelling themes in this movie take you on ride through your own emotions.

Answer 4

Thanks ms. sue :)

Answer 5

You're welcome, Mohammad.