I am doing an intro paragraph of being on a pedal boat at a bay. My writing teacher said we had to make our stories interesting and make people want to read it and be fascinated with it. So, I started with:
"Ahhh!!! We're going to sink," said Elana.
For my second line, what should I put?
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Why does Elana think they are going to sink?
There a strong winds which are rocking the boat and there are some water leaking in on both sides.
"Water is pouring into the boat!"
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