The writer should change the word "friendly" to maintain a more formal tone in the email. A more formal alternative could be "approachable" or "personable." The other words, "sincerely" and "attention," are appropriate for a formal email.
I am applying for the position of summer cashier. I learned about this job from your advertisement in the school paper. I had experience working as a volunteer cashier at my club booth at the 4H fair. I am friendly a hard worker and awesome at customer service thank you for your time and attention. I have attached my résumé to this email sincerely, Anthony Jones, which word should the writer changed to maintain the formal tone of the email With the word, friendly, sincerely or attention
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