There's no way to know if this is a good intro or not ... not unless we can read the whole paper first.
Have you at least written the rough draft?
How is my introductory paragraph to persuasive writing?
Picture this, you are taking a test and the person next to you is chewing their gum loudly,so you can't concentrate. How disrespectful is that? The school board needs to make a rule no chewing gum in school.
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No, I have made an informal outline. I have 3 Key ideas for not chewing gum in school 1. distractive to other students 2. school would be cleaner 3 would teach students respect Each key idea has 3 supporting facts.
After you have written your rough draft -- paragraphs, not just an outline -- then decide if this is a good intro.
Repost when you have it all together.
Repost when you have it all together.
Was my grammar and punctuation okay in the paragraph?