how do i phrase a thesis statement about the background events that are occuring during the novel the lord of the flies?

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PLEASE HELP ME! :)

Writeacher · Answer

Abby or Monica or whoever,

Read through the links already given. Then come up with a rough draft of a thesis statment, and someone here will be able to help you.

Keep in mind that we are not here to do your work for you, but to help you learn how to do your own assignments.

I know thesis statements can be gut-wrenching, but it must start with what YOU want to prove in your paper and what YOU think about that topic.

Ronda · Answer

They said I need to narrow down the thesis statment - here is the statement - How the war,economy and the health reform is affecting the country today, how about 'the affects of lives from health reform and economy'?