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Question

My academic prose has exhibited creatively re-establishing an original element with new messages through “A Closer Look: Analyzing Tangled (2012) and Its Deeper Critique of "Rapunzel" (1812). Firstly, I state that “most would presume that [Tangled] is merely another movie created to blend in with contemporary female empowerment films such as Frozen (2013) or Brave (2012), as it clearly displays independently strong women…[although] a closer look would reveal that [this] is Disney’s way of transgressing the lesser known fairytale "Rapunzel" (1812).” The body of my essay, then, utilizes the characters of Rapunzel and the Mother of Rapunzel to support this thesis.
In this explicit way, I highlight how I creatively re-establish the originally perceived purpose of the film “Tangled” (2010) with the new message that its purpose is to actually transgress “Rapunzel.” In this way, the commonly perceived purpose of “Tangled” (2010) as being feminism due to the fact that it is a conventional female empowerment film. Although, I exhibit creativity by introducing a new perception, or that it is actually a transgression of its hypo text.