Revised comments:
1. "Our readings mentioned this earlier, with the monkeys being the starting point. Click here to see the relevant section."
2. "Refer back to our readings where the story began with the monkeys - the link to that part is here."
3. "If you recall, the monkeys were the beginning of this story in our readings. You can find that section linked here."
4. "Remember how our readings began with the monkeys? You can revisit that part by clicking on the link provided."
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1. Comment: "We read about this earlier - it all started with the monkeys - see the part of our readings linked here."
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