The last thing you write is the introduction.
Start with your thesis statement. Then write the body of your essay supporting your thesis.
Then you will be able to easily write your introduction.
How can I write an introduction to an essay about a very out of control class I was in and how by that whole experience I was giving the opportunity to graduate early
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how should the thesis start because this is for a college essay
Study these excellent sites about thesis statements.
http://owl.english.purdue.edu/owl/resource/545/01/
http://www.unc.edu/depts/wcweb/handouts/thesis.html
http://www.indiana.edu/~wts/pamphlets/thesis_statement.shtml
http://leo.stcloudstate.edu/acadwrite/thesistatement.html
http://owl.english.purdue.edu/owl/resource/545/01/
http://www.unc.edu/depts/wcweb/handouts/thesis.html
http://www.indiana.edu/~wts/pamphlets/thesis_statement.shtml
http://leo.stcloudstate.edu/acadwrite/thesistatement.html
so my essay will be an analytical
From the way you've described your essay, it looks more like an expository essay.