How can i make my essay on mary mcleod bethune more narrative and interesting?

Answer 1

Use colorful adjectives and precise verbs.
Emphasize what you think is most fascinating about Mary Bethune.

Answer 2

like what kind of adjectives and verbs

Answer 3

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