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The themes that revolve around film noir include violence, lust, greed, betrayal and depravity which are all issues that occur in this movie.
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The themes that revolve around film noir are all included in this movie: violence, lust, greed, betrayal, and depravity.
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The themes that revolve around film noir -- violence, lust, greed, betrayal, and depravity -- all are present in this movie.
The themes that revolve around film noir -- violence, lust, greed, betrayal, and depravity -- all are present in this movie.
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