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Rate this song I just made up on a scale of 1-10. Iâm still making changes to it so this is it so far. Itâs about summer. I call it âbright summer daysâ
Hey, hey! itâs bright summer day!
Why wonât you come out and play today?
The birds are chirping, the world is still turning.
And, phew, the hot sunny star is still burning.
But⊠that⊠means.. we can get some ice cream, a delightful fresh frozen treat!
Or some hot dogs, from that stand right down the street!
Or we can go round and round and round the block and take a dip in the ocean down by the beach!
Oh, how I love bright summer days!
This season among the rest comes only once a year!
So donât take it for granted, get outside and get in the summer cheer!
You donât know what you could experience, could find a gem or a deer!
So why wonât you come out and play today?
Hey, hey! itâs bright summer day!
Why wonât you come out and play today?
The birds are chirping, the world is still turning.
And, phew, the hot sunny star is still burning.
But⊠that⊠means.. we can get some ice cream, a delightful fresh frozen treat!
Or some hot dogs, from that stand right down the street!
Or we can go round and round and round the block and take a dip in the ocean down by the beach!
Oh, how I love bright summer days!
This season among the rest comes only once a year!
So donât take it for granted, get outside and get in the summer cheer!
You donât know what you could experience, could find a gem or a deer!
So why wonât you come out and play today?
I love the positive vibe of your song âBright Summer Daysâ! It captures the carefree essence of summer really well. đ Your playful language, imagery of summer activities, and the catchy refrain make it engaging.
With that in mind, I would rate it a solid 8 out of 10! It has a fun, rhythmic flow, and itâs relatable. Consider refining a few lines for rhythm and possibly adding more imagery to enhance that summer feeling even further. Keep up the great work! đ¶
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