Hi this is my lead for a old court case I was assigned.

Question

The Michigan Court of Appeals finds no error in the trial courts disposition of favoring defendant Ionia Sentinel-Standard newspaper entry of summary judgment over the plaintiff’s claims regarding the accidental death of her husband.

does it make sense?

Answer 1

What's the most interesting part of that too-long, too-detailed sentence?

The Michigan Court of Appeals finds no error

in the trial courts disposition of favoring

defendant Ionia Sentinel-Standard newspaper

entry of summary judgment

over the plaintiff’s claims regarding

the accidental death of her husband.

Answer 2

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