hi ppl does this look like an intresting book review

The book that I have recently been reading is called sense and sensibility by Jane Austen.
The book is about a family The Dashwoods which live in Sussex, England. On the death of the father, Henry Dashwood who owned Norland Park, the land was passed to John Dashwood, henrys first son of his first marriage. Henry had insisted John that his second wife and his daughters would live with John after he had died.
John was extremely selfish and uncaring and made his stepmother and daughters move into a cottage in Devonshire because his mother in law Mrs Ferras had convinced him to. Because of that John did not complete the command his father had insisted.
Elinor Dashwood – henrys second wife’s daughter and Edward Ferrars- henrys first wife’s brother, felt a common attraction for each other but Elinor could not say anything to him because of the situation going on between the two families.

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You are summarizing the story, but it's not complete.

A book review includes summary, to be sure, but it should also include YOUR THOUGHTS about the book. This webpage should help you:
http://leo.stcloudstate.edu/acadwrite/bookrev.html

Please repost when you have redone your assignment.

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is this better

Sense And Sensibility

The book that I have recently been reading is called sense and sensibility by Jane Austen. This story is a love story.
The book is about a family The Dashwoods which live in Sussex, England. On the death of the father, Henry Dashwood who owned Norland Park, the land was passed to John Dashwood, henrys first son of his first marriage. Henry had insisted John that his second wife and his daughters would live with John after he had died.
John was extremely selfish and uncaring and made his stepmother – and her daughters move into a cottage in Devonshire because his mother in law Mrs Ferras who was a very cunning person had convinced him to. Because of that John did not complete the command his father had insisted.
Elinor Dashwood – henrys second wife’s daughter and Edward Ferrars- henrys first wife’s brother, felt a common attraction for each other but Elinor could not say anything to him because of the situation going on between the two families.
And this is all I have read
I would rate this book 8 out of 10.i would recommend it to a person who likes chalanging books and a person who likes classics.
You haven't read the whole book? As far as you've summarized is only the very beginning of the work. Before writing a book review, you really should read the entire book!

I still see almost total summary (of only the first part of the book) and almost no personal opinion except the last sentence. You would need to give reasons for your last statement. Reasons = explanations.

Did you go through the items on the webpage I sent you?

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