Hi Miss Sue, Here is the final draft can you check it for me? Thank you

Dear Grandmother Irene

Happy Birthday to you on this special day!

Shine like a star today on your Birthday.

Have a wonderful time at your Celebration Party.

Wishing you all the best on your Birthday.

How old are you today?
One year older and wiser.
Have a great day today.
Happy Birthday to you Grandmother Irene!
May all your wishes and dreams come true!
Love always your only grandson Joe Smith

3 answers

This is very nice. However, you don't have a declarative sentence.
what would a declarative sentence be?

Would this be right

It is a nice day today.
Yes. That's a declarative sentence.

You could make this a declarative sentence by adding a subject and verb.

One year older and wiser

You are one year older and wiser.