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The Differences and Similarities Essay : Kittens and Puppies
Have you ever wondered what the difference is between owning a puppy or a kitten ? This is a question people may ask if they are looking into getting a pet . Having both pets , I can tell you that there is many similar characteristics . There are also some very big differences that is important to know before getting either for a pet .

There are many things about kittens and puppies that have things in common . Both are in the early stages of their lives they are not fully grown . This is why they have so much energy . They both need to be played with or they get overly hyper and that usually leads to them destroying things . They obviously have to eat , drink , be groomed , and need attention to survive . Both these animals need love and care to live a long and fulfilling life . In all of these different ways kittens and puppies are similar .

Although they have similarities they also have many differences between kittens and puppies . For example kittens have to be groomed everyday , where as in a puppy may only need to be groomed 1 a week ( depending on the breed) . They also have different food that is required for their diet . Puppies may need more attention then kittens , kittens tend to entertain themselves for 30-45 minutes at a time . Kittens also need scorching items so they can groom their claws , puppies will not need that . Puppies you can train and teach them tricks , where as kittens you can train them but not as well as a puppy .These are some basic differences between a puppy and a kitten .

Trying to decide which pet to own may seem difficult or even frustrating , but when it comes down to it they aren’t too different . Knowing the similarities and differences helps you become educated to so you will for sure pick the right pet .
Even though they are different either one you get will show you love and compassion the same way you will . So even if kittens need different type of toys , food , attention , and grooming. Both animals will love you dearly .