Hi, I need help with making a stronger thesis statement that I'm going to use on my midterm assignment for Pre-Modern World History.

Question

Here's the thesis statement that I've come up with: The book 'The Natural and the Supernatural in the Middle Ages' portrays that the Middle Ages people held a healthy fear of unanticipated events due to these events being linked with mystical affairs.

If anyone could help me make this a stronger thesis, it would be much appreciated s I know my thesis is good, I just want to make it that much better.

Answer 1

This site has a lot of great ideas.

http://leo.stcloudstate.edu/acadwrite/thesistatement.html