hi i need a paragraph not instructions on introduction paragraph

Question

No one here will write your paragraph for you. Only you can do that. Once you have one written, please post it and someone here will critique your work.

http://leo.stcloudstate.edu/acadwrite/intro.html

http://nutsandbolts.washcoll.edu/beginning.html

http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/intros.htm
and
http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/composition/thesis.htm