Hi friends, I would love you can help me with my homework and to tell me if there are mistakes. Thanks
Dear Mark,
I hope you are well. Thanks for your last email. It sounds as if you have a great time with your parents. I'm writing to tell you about my new apartment in Trujillo and how I’m settling in my new life.
As you know I have moved six months ago. Living in a different place, it has been stressful for me. Everything is new and my neighbors are not friendly. I suppose it’s because they have a lot of children running around their apartment. Last week I came across some toys in the laundry room.
Personally, I think Trujillo is a nice place and there are a lot of places where you can go walking. My apartment is located close to the river bank, so every day I can enjoy the stunning sunset. The food in Trujillo is truly diverse but the most popular and affordable is Shambar.
By the way, I would love to visit you in summer and look after the puppies while you are in the field.
Well that’s all for now and I can’t wait to see you in summer,
Bye for now
Liz
1 answer
In the 1st sentence in the 3rd paragraph, replace “you” with “I” since the second-person pronoun is out of place.
You might also explain what Shambar is!