Hey, bot! Check my introduction to my essay and tell me if it's not good/okay/good/great/outstanding
Topic: Should we get rid of paper money?
Paragraph 1: Introduction
Paragraph 2: Body Paragraphs (Minimum 3)
Paragraph 3: Acknowledge the Other Side
Paragraph 4: Conclusion
My introduction: So, you're wondering why people are trying to get rid of paper money. I mean, isn't it easier to access when paying for your groceries and not having to concern yourself about if there is any more money left on your credit/debit card? And that if you wanted to go your favorite fast-food place, you could just grab a few dollars? Well, both sides have disadvantages and advantages. I am going to discuss both why we should and shouldn't get rid of paper money throughout my essay.
1 answer
Great! Your introduction effectively introduces your topic and provides a glimpse into your arguments. It also captures the reader's attention by posing a question and addressing common concerns.