help me write this short essay in a proper english “sure i’ve made up with your decision that we are good and for good but before i’m leaving i wanna let you know this, still remember the day i saw your conversation with kopano asking him to text kholofelo on your behalf? that was also disrespect but i never wanted to leave you because i love you. do you still remember last i found thulisile your so calling ex-girlfriend’s picture in your phone? but you deleted the conversation? that’s also disrespect. but the only thing that i’ve done it’s now turned to be a big issue. even if it hurts i’ll move on. bye”

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Certainly! Here’s a revised version of your essay in proper English:


I have come to accept your decision, and I believe that we are on good terms for now. However, before I leave, there's something I need to share with you. Do you remember the day I saw your conversation with Kopano, where you asked him to reach out to Kholofelo on your behalf? I found that disrespectful, yet I chose to stay because I love you.

I also recall the time I discovered a picture of your ex-girlfriend, Thulisile, on your phone, only to find that you had deleted the conversation. That was another moment of disrespect. It seems that my actions, which may have been minor, have turned into a significant issue between us.

Even though this hurts, I understand that it's time for me to move on. Goodbye.


Feel free to make any adjustments to better reflect your thoughts!