Help me write this in a proper English, “good afternoon sir/madam I have seen your account in TikTok for renting apartment in Tembisa, I texting you asking if you still have apartment to rent. I hope to hear from you soon thank you”

Answer 1

Certainly! Here's a more polished version of your message:

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Good afternoon,

I hope this message finds you well. I came across your TikTok account regarding apartment rentals in Tembisa, and I am writing to inquire whether you still have any apartments available for rent.

Thank you for your time, and I look forward to hearing from you soon.

Best regards,
[Your Name]

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Feel free to add your name at the end!