Lisa's revised thesis statement could be: "Adopting a pet from a shelter is beneficial because it saves the animal's life, helps control pet overpopulation, and reduces costs."
Help Lisa rewrite her thesis statement so that it uses parallel structure. Lisa’s thesis: Adopting a pet from a shelter is beneficial because of saving the animal’s life, to help control pet overpopulation, and it saves money. Thesis using parallel structure
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