Hello!

Question

Is this good thesis? How can I make it better?

I would recommend this novel to other readers because it is mysterious, appeals through emotions, but hard to understand some of the context.

Thank you.

Answer 1

That's a recommendation, not a thesis!

http://leo.stcloudstate.edu/acadwrite/thesistatement.html

Read through this entire webpage, the bad and the good. Then rewrite yours.

Let us know what you write.

Answer 2

And here's a video that will explain the difference between a topic and a thesis:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kR3KRwaRVZs

Watch and listen carefully!