Question

Hello. I'm working on an essay on which is better?- online school or brick and mortar school. I'm having difficulties coming up with an introduction sentence, however I do have my thesis. Thesis: For high school students, brick and mortar school is a better option than online school because x, y, z.

Answer 1

I came up with one, please give feedback!
Many parents struggle to decide on whether they should send their child to a brick and mortar school or online school.

Answer 2

Hate school? Hate bossy teachers? Hate getting up in the morning? Thinking of trying online school?

Answer 3

That's a good straight-forward beginning.

Answer 4

Thank you. :) My argument is that public school is better than online though haha