Hello. Dear Ms.Sue, I see you are online. You have helped me so many times. Will you please check some sentences for me (my teacher asked me to translate but I'm not sure whether it sounds normal and natural English).

Question

1) "A thesis submitted for a doctoral degree in History" (do you think I can say Historical Sciences - word-for-word translation).
2) Do you think the phrase "Manuscript copyright" or "Authorized manuscript" makes any sense (written on the first page of the thesis).
3) Do you think it's possible to say "This thesis reveals a complicated process of the formation and development of geography, specifially of its historical aspect" (I'm not sure about "reveal" and the preposition OF after specifically).
Thank you so much.

Answer 1

Hello, Ilma (is that spelled correctly?)

1. Your first sentence is best.
2. We usually say "This manuscript is copyrighted."
3. Your words are fine.

You're welcome.