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( ESSAY QUESTION-global affairs* How has immigration affected the international diversity found in the selected state Mississippi?)
The Global affairs of Mississippi have played numerous roles in the state's international, political and economic affairs tremendously. A good example is how Mississippi has homed a growing number of immigrants. Immigrants are foreign-born residents that live in a country other than his or her birthplace. In Mississippi a high number of immigrants are from Mexico, Usually, the reason to move is to get away from violence, terrorism, gang violence, unsafe living conditions, or extreme poverty. More than 82% come from Mexico and 78% come from the Caribbean. Because of so many people coming to Mississippi for a better life, Immigrants have become a key point in Mississippi. And are a crucial part of the state and its labor force, especially in certain districts. For example, 7 percent of employees in Mississippi’s, physical, and social science residents are immigrants. As business owners, taxpayers, and employees, immigrants are a fundamental part of Mississippi’s diverse and flourishing communities and make extensive contributions that benefit all. Without immigrants, Mississippis' workforce would definitely plummet by more than 39 percent. In Mississippi, Industries such as food preparation, manufacturing, healthcare, social assistance, construction, and education are all the most populated and popular jobs for most immigrants. Giving good pay and insurance. In conclusion, Immigration has affected international diversity in Mississippi in more than a positive way, giving jobs, housing, and food.
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