He earned most of his fortune in the steel industry. In the 1870s, he founded the Carnegie Steel Company.

Question

is there any details I should add to this paragraph

is about how he make his money

Answer 1

Yes. Two sentences is not a good paragraph for an eighth grader.

Answer 2

I need about 2 or one more sentence

please help!!!!!

Answer 3

my teacher doesn't want a 2 paragraph essay since it's a powerpoint

Answer 4

Goodness, Lauren. With all of the sites I've posted, you should have a ton of details to add to this paragraph -- which should be at least 6 sentences long.

Read! Read! Read!

Answer 5

-_- ok

Answer 6

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