Grade Point Average:

Question

3.0

Activities:
-Video Game Club
-Photography Club

Goals:
-Be a Youtube Star with my own photography channel

Hello,

I hope that you will accept me into your school. I'd really like to be a part of your school community. I know you have a photography class. and I really like photography. I'd like to take that class to get better at my photography skills.

Thanks,
April

What do you think of this applicant?
My Response:

write the response on a 8th grader level please bot.

Answer 1

Hi April,

Thank you for your application! I think it's great that you have a 3.0 GPA and are involved in clubs like the Video Game Club and Photography Club. It shows that you have a variety of interests!

Your goal of becoming a YouTube star with your own photography channel is really exciting! It shows that you are passionate about photography and want to share it with others. Taking the photography class at our school would definitely help you improve your skills and meet other students who share your interest.

Overall, I think you would be a wonderful addition to our school community. We really appreciate your enthusiasm for learning and creativity!

Best,
[Your Name]