Goodmorning Mr.Rothman, I just did my recent Trig test in your class and I got a poor score on it which is an 85 and to me that is a poor score seeming all of my test in your classes are high 90s or above. I looked over my answers multiple times then realized my mistakes I have been and so I made you a paper of my fixed questions on question 7 and 15. I really hope this will bring my grade up to a 90 or 80 because my grade has dropped in your class from a 98 to a 97 and I worked very hard to get that to a 98. As you know from all of my assignments in your class I make sure I always try my best to keep outstanding grades. 

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Subject: Request for Review of Recent Trigonometry Test

Dear Mr. Rothman,

Good morning. I hope this message finds you well.

I recently completed the Trigonometry test in your class and received a score of 85. Given that my previous test scores have consistently been in the high 90s or above, I view this score as disappointing. After reviewing my answers multiple times, I identified the mistakes I made on questions 7 and 15, and I have prepared a document outlining my corrected solutions.

I am hopeful that this will help improve my grade, as I have noticed it has dropped from a 98 to a 97. I have worked very hard to achieve that 98, and I aim to maintain high standards in all my assignments in your class.

Thank you for your consideration. I appreciate your support and guidance.

Best regards,

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