"Going to Cedar Point, fields of soy beans all around, in the seat of the car, Joyce riding, and Sue, together." This construction:
has a subject and predicate that do not agree in number.
*** is a sentence fragment.
includes a pronoun that has no appropriate antecedent.
includes a shift in person.
includes a shift in tense.
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Check my answer (***) please. :)
Yes, correct.
sentence fragment