for english class i have to write a poem personifying something. I chose to personify a picture in a picture frame. I am not at all good at poems and was wondering if you guys could read mine and tell me what changed i should make and if its really bad and i should just start over :/ lol
~Picture in a Picture Frame~
Oh, picture in a picture frame.
How you write us a story with just a few simple colors and shapes.
You can replay a story that happened many years ago
You can breathe life into a still photo.
On a desk,on a table, on a mantle, whereever you are and wereever you go You write a beautiful story, a song, a play, or a novel.
Your worth a thousand words.
Oh, picture in a picture frame.
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The second line needs to be rhymed whith something as well as the fifth.
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