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Once upon a time in a faraway kingdom lived a young princess BY THE NAME OF angel. Angel always RECEIVED PAMPERING, food, and lots of clothes. SHE was a lovable being.
All angel ever really wanted was a true friend. She lived in her palace with her MOTHER,FATHER, and over 50 servants. No one really had time for her. (TRY?: her parents and even the servants who were meant to serve her day and night paid her no attention)
ONE DAY AT THE STROKE OF MIDNIGHT, angel sees a wishing star and wishes upon it. She wishes for a friend.
Next morning, SNOW HAS FALLEN and angel decides to build a snow figure. ONCE she's finished making that snow figure it comes to life in the form of a young prince.(try?: and her one wish was soon becoming a reality)
She befriends him and soon falls in love with him. Angel's mother and father oppose this relationship and decide to kill her dearest friend.
Angel FIGURES OUT what her parents are up to and decides to before they CAN kill her love. She stabs herself WITH BLOOD SURROUNDING HER.
Angel's mom and dad are depressed after seeing this. They both begin to cry. Just then, the young prince appears and FOCUSES ALL HIS ATTENTION on angel.
He brings angel back to life with his magical powers. Angel's mom and dad REALIZE THEIR WRONG DOINGS. They say sorry to her and her LOVE. TOGETHER THEY decide to get this couple married.
ANGEL GETS HER WISH AND MORE. SHE NOT ONLY RECEIVES A FRIEND BUT ALSO A HUSBAND. Angel and her prince live happily ever after.
For art I have to create this fairytale book. It has to be 8 pages sided. It has to be short, because on each page we are going to illustrate a picture and below that we are going to write a minimum of 2-3 sentences. It has to start with once upon a time and end with happily ever after. I've made mine up and I would really appreciate someone going through it and making any improvements.
The Snow Prince
Once upon a time in a faraway kingdom lived a young princess named angel. Angel always got good services, food, and lots of clothes. Angel was a lovable being.
All angel ever really wanted was a true friend. She lived in her palace with her mom, dad, and over 50 servants. No one really had time for her.
Next day, at midnight, angel sees a wishing star and wishes upon it. She wishes for a friend.
Next morning, it is really snowy, so angel decides to build a snow figure. As she's finished making that snow figure it comes to life in the form of a young prince.
She befriends him and soon falls in love with him. Angel's mother and father oppose this relationship and decide to kill her dearest friend.
Angel knows what her parents are up to and decides to before they kill her love. She stabs herself. There is blood everywhere.
Angel's mom and dad are depressed after seeing this. They both begin to cry. Just then, the young prince appears and puts all his focus on angel.
He brings angel back to life with his magical powers. Angel's mom and dad apologize. They say sorry to her and her prince. They both decide to get this couple married.
Angel and her prince lived happily ever after.
Please add in anything I've missed and more details would be appreciated. Thanks.
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