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The data from each treatment suggests that at 1.5M H2SO4, there was an increased volume of hydrogen gas and increased reaction rate for generating hydrogen gas, with an average volume difference of 28mL compared to 0.1M H2SO4 not solely from concentration, the mass of magnesium is under control to minimise the volume and having greater volume of gas.

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The data from each treatment suggests that at 1.5M H2SO4, there was an increased volume of hydrogen gas and an increased reaction rate for generating hydrogen gas. This increase in volume was not solely due to the concentration of the acid, as the mass of magnesium was controlled to minimize the volume while still achieving a greater volume of gas. On average, there was a difference of 28mL in volume compared to when using 0.1M H2SO4.