First -- although I didn't find your sources online, I'm sure you plagiarized most of your journal entry. Plagiarism on a college paper usually earns the student a failing grade in the class, and perhaps expulsion from the university.
Please go back and write this journal, especially the middle paragraphs IN YOUR OWN WORDS.
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Thanks Miss Sue, I just did, but it is difficult to re-send to you..... I just sent you another paragraph