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Each year she selects her best vegetables, and enters them in the fair. She has won blue ribbons, medals, and certificates for her vegetables. "Oh, I just like being outside, That's why I enjoy gardening," Fay said.
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Our neighbor, Lamont, has fruit trees on his property. "Lamont, what kinds of fruit do you grow?" I asked. "Well, I grow peaches, apricots, pears, and plums,"
he replied. "Wow! That's quite a variety," I said. Lamont's son, Riley, helps his dad care for the trees. "oh, it's constant work and care," Riley said, "but, the delicious results are worth the effort." After the fruit is harvested, Riley's mother, Charlotte, cans the fruit for use throughout the year. She makes preserves, and she gives them as gifts for special occasions. Charlotte sells some of her preserves to Kurt Simmons, the owner of a local shop. People come from all over the county to buy Charlotte's preserves. Riley's aunt, Fay, grows corn, tomatoes, beans, and squash in her garden. Each year she selects her best vegetables, and enters them in the fair. She has won blue ribbons, medals, and certificates for her vegetables. "Oh, I just like being outside, That's why I enjoy gardening," Fay said. Fay's specialty, squash-and-tomato bread, is one of the most delicious breads I have ever tasted.
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This is my correction:
Each year she selects vegetables, and enters them in the fair. She has won blue ribbons, medals, and certificates for her vegetables. "Oh, I just like being outside." "That's why I enjoy gardening," Fay said.
Each year she selects vegetables, and enters them in the fair. She has won blue ribbons, medals, and certificates for her vegetables. "Oh, I just like being outside." "That's why I enjoy gardening," Fay said.
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Each year, she selects vegetables, and enters them in the fair. She has won blue ribbons, medals, and certificates for her vegetables. "Oh, I just like being outside. That's why I enjoy gardening," Fay said.
Each year, she selects vegetables, and enters them in the fair. She has won blue ribbons, medals, and certificates for her vegetables. "Oh, I just like being outside. That's why I enjoy gardening," Fay said.
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