Figure 2 shows that as the rate of MCV1 coverage increases, there is a corresponding decrease in the incidence rate of measles worldwide.

Question

Figure 2 indicates that as the rate of MCV1 coverage increases, the incidence rate of measles decreases on a global scale.

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Answer 1

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