Farming, Sustainable Path"

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by Miriam Horn

Working with his dad and brother on land homesteaded by his maternal great-grandparents just after the Civil War, Justin grew up hearing how his grandmothers put wet tea towels in windows to try to keep out the black blizzards of the Dust Bowl. Given responsibility for several fields while still in high school, he’d watched his own soils blowing and washing away, weeds running out of control and paltry yields. But it wasn’t until he went off to Kansas State University that he understood a prime cause of that damage: generations of plowing.

Though few landscapes appear more beautiful, fertile and orderly than the straight, black, fragrant furrows of a newly tilled field, plowing is unnatural and, in many climates and soils, one of the most destructive things a farmer can do. Plowing strips soil bare, exposing it to erosion by rain and wind. It collapses soil structure — closing off the water channels left by deep roots and worms — and harms life in the soil, which though it may appear dead is in fact Earth’s most biodiverse ecosystem, containing a third of all organisms. Those thousands of microbial species are critical to human survival. They sustain photosynthesis, which all food and oxygen come from, by ferrying nutrients to plants and protecting them from pathogens. They decompose wastes, turning corpses of plants and animals back into new life. They’re also directly vital to human health, the source of 90 percent of antibiotics and 60 percent of anticancer drugs.

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Use the excerpts to answer the question. Select Passage 1 and Passage 2.

In 3–5 sentences, compare and contrast the text structure of the two excerpts. Why do you think each author chose to present information in this way?

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The answer is very clear.

The answer is fully supported by details.

There may be a few errors in grammar, usage, or mechanics. Errors do not interfere with meaning.

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The answer is mostly clear.

The answer is supported by mostly relevant details.

There are a few errors in grammar, usage, or mechanics. Errors do not interfere with meaning.

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The answer is somewhat clear.

Details are weak or not related.

There are some errors in grammar, usage, and mechanics. Errors interfere with meaning.

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There are few or no supporting details.

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Answer 1

In the excerpts, the text structure of Miriam Horn's writing is narrative and expository, combining personal storytelling with informative content. The narrative component centers on Justin's experiences and observations on his family's farm, establishing a personal connection to the topic. In contrast, it transitions into an expository structure when discussing the negative impacts of plowing on soil health, presenting factual information about soil ecosystems and their importance to human survival. Each author chose this blend of structures to engage the reader emotionally through Justin's story while simultaneously delivering critical information about farming practices and their consequences, thereby emphasizing the need for sustainable agriculture.