The group of words starting with "Also" is not a complete sentence.
Check these out if you need to add more details -- and I think you should. What you've written is pretty sketchy.
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Explain why some young women would agree to come to the colony of New France as filles du roi.
Some young women would agree to come to the colony of New France as filles du roi to lead better lives, gain some fortunes, and have better homes. Also to start new realtionships with new families. They could socialise more freely with people around them, and be happy.
I added more info. Is this good?
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Some young women would agree to come to the colony of New France as filles du roi to lead better lives, gain some fortunes, and have better homes. They would probably also gain some rights there, the right to start new relationships. King Louis would pay off for them. They wouldn't have to spend a penny on anything. They would also receive some gifts from the king. They could socialise more freely with people around them, and be happy.
"King Louis would pay off for them." = ???
How would their ability to "socialise more freely" actually work? With whom could they socialize before coming to the colony? After?
How would their ability to "socialise more freely" actually work? With whom could they socialize before coming to the colony? After?