Exercise 2: Creating Characters' Motivations Objective: Practice creating your own characters and developing their internal and external motivations. Instructions: Create two characters and provide a description of their internal and external motivations. Then, write a short scene where their motivations influence their actions. Character 1: • Internal Motivation: ____________________________________________ • External Motivation: ____________________________________________ Character 2: • Internal Motivation: ____________________________________________

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Character 1: Lily Bennett

  • Internal Motivation: Lily seeks validation and acceptance after years of feeling overlooked and underestimated. She is driven by a need to prove her worth, both to herself and to those around her.
  • External Motivation: As a junior architect, Lily is determined to impress her firm’s senior partners with her innovative design proposal for a high-profile urban project. Winning the assignment would not only elevate her position in the firm but also give her the recognition she craves professionally.

Character 2: Marcus Chen

  • Internal Motivation: Marcus grapples with guilt from a past failure where a friend's career was jeopardized due to a missed opportunity he could have facilitated. He is motivated by a desire to make amends and help others succeed to relieve his sense of shame.
  • External Motivation: As a project manager for a non-profit organization focused on community development, Marcus is pressured to secure funding for an important initiative that would help local families. He believes that if he can deliver this project successfully, he will redeem himself and also create positive change in the community.

Short Scene

Setting: A sleek, glass-walled conference room overlooking the city. Lily is preparing for a presentation to the firm's partners, while Marcus is waiting to discuss potential collaboration.


Lily stood beside the conference table, her hands slightly trembling as she flipped through the pages of her design proposal. A view of the bustling city chose this moment to gleam through the windows, shining a spotlight on her inner turmoil.

Lily’s heart raced. This is it, she thought. She could hear the whispers of doubt echoing in her mind, reminders of every time she had been brushed aside in meetings or her ideas stolen by peers. If I pull this off, they’ll finally see me for who I am.

Marcus entered the room, his stride steady but his mind buzzing. He had just come from an urgent meeting with a potential donor, and the weight of their expectations rested heavily on him. As he approached Lily, he noticed her distressed expression.

“Hey, you okay?” he asked, his voice gentle yet probing.

Lily forced a smile, hiding her anxiety behind a façade of professionalism. “Yeah, just… finalizing things for the presentation. How did your meeting go?”

Marcus shrugged, the frustration clear in his eyes. “It’s tough out there. They want results, and I need to make sure we secure this funding for the community project. It’s a lot of pressure.”

Lily’s internal motivation flared. She saw an opportunity. This could be her moment to shine, to not only impress the partners but perhaps even help Marcus succeed. But she hesitated. What if her idea was too ambitious? What if it didn’t work?

“Maybe if we combine our presentations…,” she began hesitantly. “Your community project is impactful. I could incorporate some elements in my proposal. It could really show the partners how our firm can lead initiatives that matter.”

Marcus’s eyes widened, a flicker of hope igniting in him. “That’s a great idea, Lily! If we present a unified front, highlighting synergy between design and community impact, we might just change the game!”

Suddenly, Lily felt a rush of purpose. She envisioned not just her name being recognized but also the potential to help Marcus redeem his past failures. This was bigger than her own aspirations. Together, they could make a real difference.

“Let’s do it,” she said, determination seeping into her tone. “I’ll revise the design to illustrate your project’s benefits. We can meet later today and make it strong.”

As they began brainstorming ideas, an alliance formed—one born from internal motivations of healing and validation, both driving them to support each other towards success. Lily felt growing confidence, while Marcus found a sense of relief; together, they were crafting not just a proposal but also a path to mutual redemption.