Emilia is writing a narrative set in the summer. Read the following excerpt:
(1) The heat shimmered around the cool, aqua-blue pool. (2) Marlene decided she hated the smell of chlorine. (3) Across the pool, she saw Mari talking to a small group of friends and neighbors. (4) She couldn’t believe Mari was about to move away, but at least this party was a nice way to send her off.
Which sentence uses descriptive details and sensory language so the reader can visualize the event? Why?
A.
Sentence 1; it gives exact details about what the weather is like and how the pool looks and feels.
B.
Sentence 2; it gives an important detail about how the pool smells.
C.
Sentence 3; it gives details that help the reader understand exactly who is at the pool.
D.
Sentence 4; it gives details about the main character and how she feels.
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