Question

During the early adolescence (ages 12-14) the teens are very moody. As puberty is in full swing they will experience rapid body changes. The teens are sensitive to their body as it changes. Girls tend to be less fulfilled about their body image. Most want to lose weight. A show begins to show concerns for and awareness of their body. This includes shyness, blushing, feelings of modesty and need for privacy. Also during this stage the teens are curious about sexual matters. Early adolescences would rather spend their time with friends than family. They will also need a hero or an adult to look up to today.

Answer 1

This looks good, Scooby.

However -- I think you have a wrong word in this sentence:

A show begins to show concerns for and awareness of their body.

Answer 2

is it suppose to be an*

Answer 3

What does this mean?

"A show begins to show . . ."

Answer 4

During the early adolescence (ages 12-14) the teens are very moody. As puberty is in full swing they will experience rapid body changes. The teens are sensitive to their body as it changes. Girls tend to be less fulfilled about their body image. Most want to lose weight. A show begins to show concerns for an awareness of their body. This includes shyness, blushing, feelings of modesty and need for privacy. Also during this stage the teens are curious about sexual matters. Early adolescences would rather spend their time with friends than family. They will also need a hero or an adult to look up to today. These young adolescents may disagree with their parents. The adolescents want to take the opposite view on it to test the parent’s values. The adolescents will also be rude to their parents and throw away any jobbies that they liked in their childhood. The teens might experience in some risky behaviors such as drugs, sex, or smoking. The teens will also feel like nothing bad could happen to them. It is important to the young adolescent to fit in and not appear different from his/her peers. What the teens wear for clothes, hair styles also becomes very important.

Answer 5

i put this will begin* does that sound better?

Answer 6

Yes, this is much better. :-)

A couple of minor corrections:

Early <b>adolescents</b> would rather spend . . .

"Jobbies" is not acceptable. It's either slang or has a different meaning that what you intend.

Change "jobbies" in this sentence:

"and throw away any jobbies that they liked in their childhood."

Answer 7

thank you just typed to fast i guess lol

Answer 8

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You're welcome.