Asked by John

Draw a line between the two peple finding out who is introducing whom.
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Is this sentence above grammatical?
Would you let me know if the expression is correct or not?
Answered by Writeacher
As written, it seems as if by drawing the line you'll figure out who is introducing whom. But that doesn't make sense. How about this:

<b>Draw a line between the two people once you find out who is introducing whom.</b>

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Answered by John
OK. Thank you. what about the following?

Draw a line between the two people While(or as) you find out who is introducing whom.
Answered by Writeacher
Ahhhh, good. And your choice would be "as" rather than "while" -- nice correction.

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