Dr. Frankenstein flung a power switch, blue streamers of static electricity crackled about the table the creature gave a grunt and opened smoldering eyes.
are you asking for it to be corrected?
Dr. Frankenstein flung on the power switch and instantly, blue streamers of static electricity crackled about the table. The creature gave a grunt and revealed his smoldering eyes.
that's how I would change it
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