History is an interpretation of evidence. It provides a meaning and EXPLANATION why history has caused a big impact on our life today. At one time, every EVERY? nation tried to vanquish one another that generated the two world wars. Likewise, status, race, gender, love, labor and so forth have triggered war or brawls of some sort. Rulers of those times treated every EVERY?matter with extreme cruelty and forced unusual punishment on those who trespassed and objected their injunctions. People were left hopelessly in grief and abhorrence. As time went on, treaties and alliances were made while cities were divided and made into new countries.CITIES MADE INTO COUNTRIES? We have a deep history with every EVERY? country COMMA and with a small amount of provocation COMMA it can lead to war. Back then we had strict religion, culture and traditionS. Now that we are modernizing COMMA we are becoming less stringent COMMA allowing more diversity and creating more prerogative laws.
YOU SAY "EVERY," ARE THERE NO EXCEPTIONS?
REVIEW COMMA USAGE.
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History is an interpretation of evidence. It provides a meaning and explanatory to why history has caused a big impact on our life today. At one time, every nation tried to vanquish one another that generated the two world wars. Likewise, status, race, gender, love, labor and so forth have triggered war or brawls of some sort. Rulers of those times treated every matter with extreme cruelty and forced unusual punishment on those who trespassed and objected their injunctions. People were left hopelessly in grief and abhorrence. As time went on, treaties and alliances were made while cities were divided and made into new countries. We have a deep history with every country and with a small amount of provocation it can lead to war. Back then we had strict religion, culture and tradition. Now that we are modernizing we are becoming less stringent allowing more diversity and creating more prerogative laws.
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