Question

Does this sentence require any improvements in terms of punctuation?

I think Hansberry means that summer is honorable in terms that this season does fulfill wishes and dreams like she had been told; Hansberry’s wish being that the dying woman could live to see “at least one more summer”(661), which she did.

Answer 1

There are more problems in here than just punctuation.

Wordiness
Wrong conjunction
Fragment

Answer 2

How should I revise this sentence, then?

Answer 3

First, cut out all unnecessary words.

Then read up on how to use a semicolon correctly.

And make sure you are 100% sure of the meaning of every word you have used and that it's being used correctly.