It's a very awkward sentence, for sure. try this:
When I volunteered at the hospital, I never had a chance to care for __________. Now that I have my own practice, they will be my new patients.
You need to say who "they" are. The vagueness of this is part of the problem.
Does this sentence make sense?
They will be my new patients whom I never had a chance to care for since I volunteered at hospital.
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